Ain't nothing like an interesting, gripping storyteller in hip-hop. Now when I say story, I don't mean simply someone describing some shit that happened-- I mean someone who has a mastery of plot, climax, characters, suspense and/or humor (the type of shit my fifth graders struggle with). Anyone can merely describe an event but it takes a true wordsmith to construct a compelling narrative.
I remember at this Ghostface show homey came out and sat down in an old wooden chair, talked out the lyrics to a song with no music behind it and had cats going beserk! A good story is a good story.
Although it is just a verse, and not a full song, Ghost's verse on Impossible is one of, if not the most compelling narratives on wax.
Call an ambulance, Jamie been shot, word to Kimmy Don't go Son, nigga you my motherfuckin heart Stay still Son, don't move, just think about Keeba She'll be three in January, your young God needs you The ambulance is taking too long Everybody get the fuck back, excuse me bitch, gimme your jack One, seven one eight, nine one one, low battery, damn Blood comin out his mouth, he bleedin badly Nahhh Jamie, don't start that shit Keep your head up, if you escape hell we gettin fucked up When we was eight, we went to Bat Day to see the Yanks In Sixty-Nine, his father and mines, they robbed banks He pointed to the charm on his neck With his last bit of energy left, told me rock it with respect I opened it, seen the God holdin his kids Photogenic, tears just burst out my wig Plus he dropped one, oh shit, here come his Old Earth With no shoes on, screamin holdin her breasts with a gown on She fell and then lightly touched his jaw, kissed him Rubbed his hair, turned around the ambulance was there Plus the blue coats, Officer Lough, took it as a joke Weeks ago he strip-searched the God and gave him back his coke Bitches yellin, Beenie Man swung on Helen In the back of a cop car, dirty Tasha tellin But suddenly a chill came through it was weird Felt like my man, was cast out my heaven now we share Laid on the stretcher, blood on his Wally's like ketchup Deep like the full assassination with a sketch of it It can't be, from Yoo-hoo's to Lee's Second grade humped the teachers, about to leave Finally this closed chapter, comes to an end He was announced, pronounced dead, y'all, at twelve ten
Here are a few other songs with with strong and interesting narratives.
I got a story to tell - The Notorious B.I.G.
Blaze a 50 - Nas
3 Sides to a Story - Joe Budden
Nikkas Bleed - The Notorious B.I.G.
Childrens Story - Slick Rick
Da Art of Story Tellin pt. 2- Outkast ft. Slick Rick
Real Nikkas Do Real Things - The Notorious B.IG.
Shakey Dog - Ghostface Killah
Fetus (Belly-Button Window Unreleased) - Nas
Beauty Jackson - Ghostface Killah
What's up kid? I know shit is rough doing your bid
ReplyDeleteWhen the cops came you should've slid to my crib
Fuck it black, no time for looking back it's done
Plus congratulations you know you got a son
I heard he looks like you, why don't your lady write you?
Told her she should visit, that's when she got hyper
Flippin, talk about he acts too rough
He didn't listen he be riffin' while I'm telling him stuff
I was like yeah, shorty don't care, she a snake too
Fucking with the niggas from that fake crew that hate you
But yo, guess who got shot in the dome-piece?
Jerome's niece, on her way home from Jones Beach - it's bugged
Plus little Rob is selling drugs on the dime
Hangin out with young thugs that all carry 9's
At night time there's more trife than ever
What's up with Cormega, did you see 'em, are y'all together?
If so then hold the fort down, represent to the fullest
Say what's up to Herb, Ice and Bullet
I left a half a hundred in your commissary
You was my nigga when push came to shove
One what? one love
Great song! FTR, the last verse is my favorite. I already had two Nas songs though. Did not want to expose myself as a Nas stan just yet!
ReplyDeleteWow, we just gonna leave Jean motherf-in Grae out of this entirely? One of the greatest storytellers of all time? (I know you're not trying to put her in the greatest "female" storyteller category). "My Story" or "Love Song"?? You fell off on this one. Lol
ReplyDelete"Love Song" is a really good song! It is a great narrative. It sounds almost like it could have been a great written story or poem. It probably was, which would explain why it sounds, dare I say, "spoken-word-ish". She doesn't really flow well on the track, and she is not lyrical with it. The artists I listed above do a better job of integrating the two.
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